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Date: 2010-05-09 03:28 pm (UTC)
This feels too short, because how can you get enough of these two the way they were here :) This was lovely, touching, sweet. I enjoyed your execution of the idea, nothing beats good old skin to skin warming up, and this felt very fresh and hot. I loved the whole emotional confusion, Sulu calling Chekov 'baby', completely unconsciously (it seemed) at first and making him work for little kisses, guh! I also liked Sulu's lines "Fuck," he declared. "Fuck, that was cold. Whew. Okay." I don't know why, just that they were simple and I could hear him saying something like that. Not leaving the moment Pavel got upset was the best thing he did, surprised me pleasantly. Good ending, full circle.
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